Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Remediation Project Reflection

The purpose of my remediation project was to translate the information from my research paper to another medium to make the argument simpler and less time consuming to read but still convey the major ideas. I think I did this pretty well, but it was hard to fit in some major points without being too extensive and basically copying what I had written in my paper. At first I had chosen to do a PowerPoint, but I found it difficult to fit the information I wanted to share on slides and keep them relatively short, so I switch to a blog/website. This made it a lot easier for me to share the information because I could put it in paragraph format so I did not have to shorten my points as much.
            My target did not change when I remediated my paper, it was still towards people that care about football and the world cup problems that have risen the awarding of the 2022 World Cup to Qatar. This project did change the rhetorical situation somewhat though because it made it a tad bit more informal. The point was to get the information and argument across but in a visually appealing way, so there were more colors used, images, and a lot shorter paragraphs.
            Using the blog to present my argument was a lot different than the paper. I used a bigger font, with a black background and white letters, and added images to each page. In the paper there was not images and wasn’t as visually appealing.

            

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Effective Websites

Appearance
Content
Usability
Purpose

Communication

Remediation - PowerPoint

I plan on using a powerpoint to remediate my paper because i feel it is the best way to present the information and keep it organized. I plan on using images of world cup stadiums that are supposed to be built for the tournament and videos of interviews with people in the field speaking on the subject. I plan on using some charts and graphs of the weather patterns in Qatar during the summer months to back up my arguments.

Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Remediation

Remediation is basically transforming info from one media to another, such as a movie that is based on a book. One way I can remediate my paper is by making a power point. In this power point I could add videos, maybe of the interviews that were used in my paper or even a Qatar weather report that shows the summer weather. I could add images of the Qatar that show the heat or of the stadiums that are to be built for the event. Another way could be to make two charts, one with the pros and cons of a summer world cup, and one with the pros and cons of a winter world cup.

Citations

References
Bullock, R., Goggin, M.D., Weinberg, F. (2013). The Norton Field to Writing 3rd Edition. New York: W.W. Norton and Company.
Martins, S. D.  (Ed.). (2015). Transnational Writing Program Administration. Boulder, Colorado. Utah State University Press.
Corbett, S. (2015, March 10). Text-to-Visual-Remediation. Writing Commons. Retrieved from writingcommoms.org. 
Baker, P. (2015, March 9). G.O.P. Senators’ Letter to Iran About Nuclear Deal Angers White House. New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com
N.A. (2015, March 10). Emergency Notification. University of Louisville. Retrieved from louisville.edu. 
Lu, M. (1991). REDEFINING THE LEGACY OF MINA SHAUGHNESSY: A CRITIQUE OF THE POLITICS OF LINGUISTIC INNOCENCE. Vol. 10. 26-40.

Works Cited
Bullock, Richard, Maureen Goggin, and Francine Weinberg. The Norton Field Guide to Writing, with Readings and Handbook (third edition). New York: W. W. Norton and Company. 2013. Print.

Martin, David S. Transnational Writing Program Administration. Boulder, Colorado: Utah State University Press.      2015. Print.

Text-to-Text Remediation - Writing Commons. n.p., 2015. Web. 10 Mar. 2015.

Baker, Peter. 'G.O.P. Senators’ Letter To Iran About Nuclear Deal Angers White House. n.p., 2015. Web. 10 Mar. 2015.

Emergency Notification — Department Of Environmental Health And Safety. louisville.edu. n.p., 2015. Web. 10 Mar. 2015.

Lu, Min-zhan. Redefining the Legacy of Mina Shauhnessy: A Critique of the Politics of Linguistic Innocence. Journal of Basic Writing. 1991. Print.

Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Research paper reflection

I chose this topic because it was a controversy that I have seen a lot lately, and one that I actually cared about and was interested in, so I figured I would actually be motivated to the write the paper. Once picking the topic of the 2022 World Cup I had to narrow down the topic to the weather and why it was not suitable for a World Cup to be held at this time. One difficult part about this paper was finding academic sources solely about this world cup. There were a few, but most pertained to the working conditions that are happening there now due to the tournament instead of the tournament itself. To overcome this I used academic sources that weren't necessarily about this World Cup but still pertained to the topic, such as athletic performance in the heat, and tourism in hot places. I feel as if a conference would have helped with my revision, because some explanation behind the comments would have helped me understand what my paper is lacking. This assignment was easier to write for me than the first assignment because I was able to express my opinion, and not just present information in an unbiased manner. In this research paper we had to use research to support our argument of what we believed was true, where in the informational report, we found the information and just presented it without taking a stand. The informational report was not about a conflict or controversy so there really was no way to argue a point, it was just providing information.

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Research Paper First Draft

Andrew Oyler
English 102-59        
Professor Paudel
3/2/2015
World Cup 2022
            According to FIFA’s official website, “Opening matches set new audience high’s for 2014 all over the world as fans watched in record numbers in nations such as Brazil, Japan, Germany, the United Kingdom, Argentina, France, the Netherlands, Croatia and Italy. An all-time high was set in French-speaking part of Belgium.” Being one of the most viewed and popular sporting event in the world, the FIFA World Cup is going to bring a lot of talk and controversy no matter where it is, but the awarding of the World Cup to Qatar to host has seemed to bring about more conflict than any tournament before. Due to the scorching hot temperatures during the summer months in Qatar, which on average can be anywhere between 35 to 45 degree Celsius, according to Aljazeera, a Qatar based broadcaster, there have been questions raised as to whether the tournament should be held in the traditional summer months, or moved to a period when the weather is cooler. Moving a tournament of this popularity, which would break a 92-year tradition of the tournament being played in the summer of course, does not sit well with everyone in the footballing world.  The 2022 World Cup that is to be hosted by Qatar should not be played in the summer due to the extreme temperatures that Qatar face in the summer months. These temperatures are unsafe for players, spectators or tourists, and could affect the amount of people that come to support the event.
            During the 2008 Olympics in Beijing there were some cautions with athletes performing based on the high temperatures there, averaging 30 degree Celsius. “The average maximum temperature in August is around 30oC (Table 1) which, according to the WBGT index, increases the risk of heat illness due to environment stress to very high levels.” (Borresen 50) With the average temperature in Qatar well above the temperatures that were posing a threat to athletes during the 2008 Olympics, these conditions are not ideal and are a serious health risk for any professional athlete, let alone one that runs on average 7 miles a match. (Fox) An article written in the California Western International Law Journal states that, “The award to Qatar was particularly controversial, as FIFA’s own technical report stated the high temperatures in Qatar could pose a health risk to not only players but to officials and spectators as well.” FIFA itself has said these conditions can cause health risks, so without an adequate fix to the issue; it would be impractical to stage a tournament during months when the temperature can cause harm.
            To deal with this heat at the event, Qatar has proposed the idea of stadium cooling technology during matches. CNN reporter Mark Tutton states, “But football's governing body seems to have been swayed by Qatar's plans to overcome the sweltering heat by building nine new fully air-conditioned open-air stadiums that work using solar power.” Tutton also says, “It will be used to chill water, which in turn will cool air before it is blown through the stadium, keeping pitch temperatures below 27 C (80 F).” This technology would provide a safe environment for the athletes to compete in during matches. The same cooling system would also be used to cool the training facilities used by the teams. (Tutton) There have been some doubts as to if this new technology will work as planned. Mark Hansford, editor for NCE.co.uk, a civil engineering news site, has said, “But Aecom design principal Graham Goymour warned that at this stage it was unknown whether the designs would work.” If this technology is sure to work, it would solve a huge problem, but there are still doubts over whether this will be an effective method of controlling the temperature.
            Not only does this temperature pose a threat to the players, but also to the fans of the event. During 2010, there were heat waves moving through Northern Europe that impacted the tourism industry and “tourists experienced thermo-physiological discomfort which could be observed in increased hospital admissions and fatalities”(Becken 7) Some of these temperatures that occurred during these heat waves were lower or around the same temperatures as the average summers in Qatar. (Heidorn) If these temperatures could cause heat related problems to tourists in Europe during that summer, then the same types of problems can occur in Qatar if the World Cup is staged in the summer. According to Becken, “The 2003 heatwave was responsible for 15,000 deaths in France and major shifts in traditional tourist flows for this year away from the traditional resorts in the Mediterranean and towards Northern or Western beach locations.” Although it is the world cup, the heat could still affect the number of spectators that could make the trip to attend the event, as these high temperatures has proven to cause changes in tourist trends in other places in the world. Arsene Wenger, the current Arsenal manager who has been involved in playing and coaching professionally for the past 46 years has recently said in an interview, "It's impossible to play in the summer and I think it makes sense, if you want people to survive there, its the only way to have it in a comfortable way for the supporters.
            Although the temperatures will be very hot, fans too will be cooled in the World Cup stadiums during the matches. The bid book director for the 2022 Qatar world cup has said, "The same air will also be projected from the back and neck area of the seats, ensuring that each seating row of each stadium provides maximum comfort and enjoyment to fans," Spectators will also be provided with transportation to and from the stadium that will be using cooling technology to keep them comfortable. (Hansford) This will only be provided to the spectators as they are attended a match, but a majority of the time spent at the event the spectators or tourists will be elsewhere because one can only attend so many matches.
            Another issue with the proposal of a world cup that is not in the summer is an interference with the domestic leagues in Europeans countries, where the season lasts from about August to May. The European football community has split opinions on this topic with many of them sharing their opinions on the disruptions a non-summer world cup would cause. Representatives for the English Premier League have said that a winter world keep is “neither workable or desirable for European domestic football” (Eurosport) Karl-Heinz Rummeneige, the chairman of the European Clubs’ Association (ECA) has stated "For the football family, the rescheduling of the FIFA World Cup 2022 presents a difficult and challenging task," Although moving the world cup from the traditional summer months would create a daunting task of readjusting a 10 month schedule to accommodate it, it can be done, and there are many people with experience in the field that believe so. The Serbian Football Association supports the movement of the World Cup from the summer months and believes “2022 World Cup is seven years away and I think they have enough time to readjust.” (Eurosport) Reuters, a reporter for the sports website Eurosport, agrees with the Serbian FA, stating, “As for the disruption, is it really beyond the wit of organizers of the richest leagues in the world, with seven years to work with, to come up with a plan to adjust their current seasonal dates to accommodate one winter World Cup?” With seven years to come up with an alternate schedule for just one year, it is hard to think that some of the biggest sports leagues in the world cannot devise a plan that is suitable for all parties. While Europeans football leagues do provide majority of the players playing in the World Cup, it is still a world event. When the event is held in the summer, it is disrupting many domestic leagues in the Americas who have found ways to deal with the interruptions.
            Staging a World Cup in the summer in a country with a place whose temperatures can reach 45 degree Celsius is not ideal for any player or spectator and can pose serious health risks for anyone involved in the event. If the cooling technology is not ready by the time the World Cup is played, the event could be disastrous. This change in tradition does bring up a problem with European domestic leagues, but with time on their side and many intelligent individuals running these associations, a solution can surely be found in the next seven years. All in all, this is the a huge sporting event that occurs only every four years, one year of European domestic football can be altered to accommodate the event. In the words of a two-time World Cup veteran Gary Neville, "Disrupted for a World Cup? You're making the World Cup sound like the Sherpa Vans Trophy. The World Cup's the World Cup, it's hardly a tin-pot competition.”



















Works Cited
Becken, Susanne. "HE IMPORTANCE OF CLIMATE AND WEATHER FOR TOURISM." Land Environment and People (2010): 7. Print.

Borresen, Jill. "Environmental Considerations for Athletic Performance at the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games." International SportMed Journal 9.2 (2008): 50. Print.

"FIFA Rules out Summer World Cup for Qatar." - Al Jazeera English. Web. 4 Mar. 2015. <http://www.aljazeera.com/sport/2014/01/fifa-rules-out-summer-world-cup-qatar-201418114833263941.html>.

"FIFA World Cup 2022: Why The United States Cannot Successfully Challenge FIFA Awarding The Cup To Qatar and How the Qatar Controversy Shows FIFA Needs Large-Scale Changes." California Western International Law Journal 42.1 (2011): 550. Print.

Fox, Kit. "Distance Run Per Game in Various Sports." Runner's World & Running Times. 10 June 2014. Web. 4 Mar. 2015. http://www.runnersworld.com/fun/distance-run-per-game-in-various-sports

Hansford, Mark. "Qatar World Cup: Will Stadiums Stay Cool?" Qatar World Cup: Will Stadiums Stay Cool? 13 Nov. 2013. Web. 4 Mar. 2015. <http://www.nce.co.uk/news/structures/qatar-world-cup-will-stadiums-stay-cool/8655710.article>.

Heidorn, Keith. "The Northern Hemisphere Heat Wave of 2010." Weather Doctor's Weather People and History:. 15 July 2011. Web. 5 Mar. 2015. <http://www.islandnet.com/~see/weather/history/2010heatwave-nh.htm>.

Reuters. "ANALYSIS-Attention European Leagues - It's the World Cup." Eurosport. 25 Feb. 2015. Web. 5 Mar. 2015. <http://www.eurosport.com/football/analysis-attention-european-leagues-it-s-the-world-cup_sto4616813/story.shtml>.

Reuters. "Winter World Cup 'unworkable and Undesirable'" Eurosport. 24 Feb. 2015. Web. 5 Mar. 2015. <http://www.eurosport.com/football/world-cup/2014/winter-world-cup-unworkable-and-undesirable_sto4615501/story.shtml>.

Tutton, Mark. "Qatar Promises Air-conditioned World Cup." CNN. Cable News Network, 10 Dec. 2010. Web. 4 Mar. 2015. <http://edition.cnn.com/2010/SPORT/12/03/qatar.world.cup/>.


"TV Viewing Breaks Records in First FIFA World Cup Matches." FIFA.com. 19 June    2014. Web. 4 Mar. 2015. <http://www.fifa.com/worldcup/news/y=2014/m=6/news=tv-viewing-breaks-records-in-first-fifa-world-cup-matches-2378078.html>.





Monday, March 2, 2015

Research Paper Outline

Andrew Oyler
English 102-59        
Professor Paudel
3/2/2015
World Cup 2022 – Outline
      I.         Introduction
·      Hook: Statistic on viewing numbers on the last world cup and its popularity.
·      Thesis: The 2022 World Cup that is to be hosted by Qatar should not be played in the summer due to the extreme temperatures that Qatar face in the summer months. These temperatures are unsafe for players, spectators or tourists, and could affect the amount of people that come to support the event.
·      Background: Describe why there is a conflict with the world cup time in Qatar
    II.         Players safety
·      Too hot for players to play a 90 minute game in the summer heat
·      Source – BBC shows average temperatures in the summer in Qatar, Source – ISMJ speaks about athletic performance in temperatures lower than the average summer in Qatar
·      Counterargument- there will be stadium cooling technology
§  Players train during the week in places other than the world cup stadiums that may not have the cooling technology
  III.         Fans
·      Fans would have to deal with the heat as well as the players, and a large portion of the world cup is the money made from the tourism
·      Source- LEAP says tourists during northern Europe experienced thermo-psychological discomfort and led to shifts in tourist flows, Source- islandnet.com shows temperatures during heat wave, some of which are level or below the average in a Qatar summer
·      Source- Heinonline journal states FIFA itself said temperatures could be risk to players, officials, and spectators
   IV.         Opposing views
·      World cup is a tradition to be in the summer
·      It will disrupt domestic European leagues schedules
·      It wont allow for players in European leagues to have a break
·      Source – Eurosport article with quotes from professional players and managers discussing why it disrupts their schedules
     V.         Solution
·      Talk about the magnitude of the world cup
·      European leagues would have 7 years to come up with a new schedule for just one year to accommodate the worlds most popular sporting event
·      It is only 1 year, everything will return to normal afterwards
·      Source – eurosport article with reasons why the world cup could work still if not in the summer
   VI.         Conclusion
·      Summarize arguments
·      Give examples of people in the field that have experience and are against it being held in the summer
·      Another fact about the popularity of the world cup